實例解析中考英語作文給分原則

       2008年中考英語作文題目：

　　Write at least 60 words about the topic “Love around me”. (以“我身邊的愛”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格)(注意：短文中不得出現考生的姓名、校名以及其他相關信息，否則不予評分)(總分16分)

　　Use the following points as a guide. (短文須包含下列要點)

　　Is there any love around you? (Give one or two examples.)

　　How do you feel when you get love from him/ her/ them?

　　What are you going to do to show your love?

　　-----------------------------以上為背景------------------------------------

　　下面我將為大家分享在這個題目下的幾篇有特點的學生作文，附實際得分和我的點評。

　　說明：由于是前幾年的作文了，這里面的作文在其他網上也能搜到。拿出來分享一個是會加上我的點評，這個是網上搜不到的，另一個也是希望孩子們更明確作文的寫法和得高分的要素。

　　第一篇：

　　I live on a planet which is full of love. I can get love form my teachers, friends and my parents. When I get love from them, I feel warm and happy. They are the most important people in my life. I should show my love to them. I will help my parents to do some housework if they are tired. I will help my friends when they are in trouble. I should show my love to the person who gives me love.

　　【實際得分情況：5+6+1=12】
 

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